tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-879178037255599955.post327321360445456671..comments2023-06-21T03:25:44.970-07:00Comments on Manisha Dusila - BA (HONS) Computer Animation Arts, UCA Rochester: Cutting Edges: La Jetee (1962) Film ReviewManisha Dusilahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18079915302436932673noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-879178037255599955.post-77237484942756407812016-01-06T04:05:56.482-08:002016-01-06T04:05:56.482-08:00Hi, thanks Jackie! And thanks for the pointers :)Hi, thanks Jackie! And thanks for the pointers :)Manisha Dusilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18079915302436932673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-879178037255599955.post-11901217881748272982016-01-05T23:30:23.735-08:002016-01-05T23:30:23.735-08:00Excellent review Manisha :)
You are introducing yo...Excellent review Manisha :)<br />You are introducing your quotes well...just be careful that when you place then, they don't break the continuity of the sentence. Here, for example, you say,<br /> <br />'Patrick Samuel describes Marker as a director who: “...He documented history and built a narrative around what he observed and the results were always profound” '<br /><br />If you were to take out the 'He' at the start of the quote, the sentence would flow much better and still make sense -<br /><br />'Patrick Samuel describes Marker as a director who: “...documented history and built a narrative around what he observed and the results were always profound” '<br /><br />Good start to the new year :)<br /><br />Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-879178037255599955.post-57935348010295351832016-01-05T14:34:47.633-08:002016-01-05T14:34:47.633-08:00(: (: Manisha Dusilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18079915302436932673noreply@blogger.com