tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-879178037255599955.post4891445059654622914..comments2023-06-21T03:25:44.970-07:00Comments on Manisha Dusila - BA (HONS) Computer Animation Arts, UCA Rochester: Space Oddities: Das Cabinet Des Dr. Caligari ReviewManisha Dusilahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18079915302436932673noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-879178037255599955.post-42933976483212616732015-09-23T03:33:23.718-07:002015-09-23T03:33:23.718-07:00Thank you for the feedback, Jackie! I will take in...Thank you for the feedback, Jackie! I will take into account the other things you said too :) I was worried I did it all wrong haha, thanks again Manisha Dusilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18079915302436932673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-879178037255599955.post-51746565460782896382015-09-22T23:30:42.749-07:002015-09-22T23:30:42.749-07:00Fantastic first review Manisha...'...chin-scra...Fantastic first review Manisha...'...chin-scratching stairways' sums up the disorientation perfectly! <br />A sensible choice and use of images - you have placed them well within the text, which makes it much more reader-friendly. You might want to consider referring directly to the images at various points, so for example, when discussing the warped architecture you could say something like, '..create a disturbing and unsettling atmosphere, as seen in figure 2.' It's just a way of linking the text to the images.<br />Also have another look at the Harvard method to make sure that you have all the required elements in your bibliography - http://community.ucreative.ac.uk/Harvard-Referencing<br /><br />Looking forward very much to your next review :) Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com