Hi Manisha, well done on getting this up. It is starting to come together, I think you hold the establishing shot at the beginning for a couple of seconds longer. I think the weakest part is the shot at 00:49 with the street It doesn't seem to fit the story and is a bit of a speed bump in the middle, of course it might more sense in the pre-viz.
Hi Manisha, well done on getting this up. It is starting to come together, I think you hold the establishing shot at the beginning for a couple of seconds longer. I think the weakest part is the shot at 00:49 with the street It doesn't seem to fit the story and is a bit of a speed bump in the middle, of course it might more sense in the pre-viz.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback, Simon :)
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