Hey Manisha, I just think you should look at a bit more 'real world' reference for your highstreet and parlour interior; things are looking a bit generic here - and I'd like to see you pulling in a bit more detail to sell these environments; it's simple stuff, like the proportion of windows, and the street furniture and signage etc - and also what the top of the buildings in a highstreet look like; importantly, you should decide where your story is happening; is this a UK highstreet or a USA one? Time to look up at the actual world again.
Hey Manisha, I just think you should look at a bit more 'real world' reference for your highstreet and parlour interior; things are looking a bit generic here - and I'd like to see you pulling in a bit more detail to sell these environments; it's simple stuff, like the proportion of windows, and the street furniture and signage etc - and also what the top of the buildings in a highstreet look like; importantly, you should decide where your story is happening; is this a UK highstreet or a USA one? Time to look up at the actual world again.
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