Manisha! ENOUGH WITH THE DRAMATIC CAPITAL LETTERS! :) In terms of soliciting feedback, just be careful of 'over using' your blog in this way, because it might start to seem a bit needy, and it might start to turn people 'off'... Compositionally, I think this feels a little like an image of 'two halves' - and personally, I think the emphasis might be off - i.e. the city is dwarfed by the 'void' and I don't think this is necessarily a fair representation of McQueen's accomplishments... what do you think?
Haha, sorry :) Okay, I did refine it for my OGR but i'll see what I can do about changing it...the city was supposed to look vast and the void in the foreground, but with the way of my painting it doesn't seem to come across.
Manisha! ENOUGH WITH THE DRAMATIC CAPITAL LETTERS! :) In terms of soliciting feedback, just be careful of 'over using' your blog in this way, because it might start to seem a bit needy, and it might start to turn people 'off'... Compositionally, I think this feels a little like an image of 'two halves' - and personally, I think the emphasis might be off - i.e. the city is dwarfed by the 'void' and I don't think this is necessarily a fair representation of McQueen's accomplishments... what do you think?
ReplyDeleteHaha, sorry :) Okay, I did refine it for my OGR but i'll see what I can do about changing it...the city was supposed to look vast and the void in the foreground, but with the way of my painting it doesn't seem to come across.
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